No doubt, someone with a dog in the race may find it hard to read this article. But if you lost the thread, and are truly interested in exploring a problem outside your job credentials, then be explicit on where you lost the thread and/or where you think it was not clear. I will respond in kind. The article addresses serious matters that should be understandable, with a certain perseverance, to an average reader.
But just an indication, the article was also written to bring the worms out of the wood.
Cheers,
S